Friday, May 30, 2008

My Poem

I am: Jimmy
Son of: Ethel G
Who needs a job, some sleep, some money
Who loves my life, family, and friends
Who sees pregnant people, poor people
Who hates school and drugs
Who fears getting sick and going to jail
Who dreams of money, having kids and success
Who has found poems of happiness
Resident of the Bronx, NY
Morris

2 comments:

Pat Wagner said...

Well done, Jimmy. You have a very good sense of rhythm and repetition. You could have made this poem even longer because it was enjoyable to read.

Anonymous said...

lol that about me